Golden Dream v.2

1. I was watching this pic with a feiend of mine and i realised how uncool was her face in the original version, imean in drawing terms, it was much more a pitning piece than a drawing peice, so i decided to be fair and draw more on this, and so i did this second version

2.It was also a whole issue how to submit this piece, first i thought in submit it over the fiers version and send the first to scraps, but i found that unfair coz a lot of people have faved dthe first one, so i submit this as a total different version

3. If you saw the fisrt version id like you to tell me your opinion , maybe i am comminting a huge msitake and the first version was ok the way it was

4. sorry if you faved the first and then you see this and think "arf what a rip why did i faved a work in process, and now i see a second version" i never see the first one as a wip.

5 this is the first time i re-work in a piece, and is great to be honest

Thansk to all poeple who faved the first one