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1. I was watching this pic with a feiend of mine and i realised how uncool was her face in the original version, imean in drawing terms, it was much more a pitning piece than a drawing peice, so i decided to be fair and draw more on this, and so i did this second version
2.It was also a whole issue how to submit this piece, first i thought in submit it over the fiers version and send the first to scraps, but i found that unfair coz a lot of people have faved dthe first one, so i submit this as a total different version 3. If you saw the fisrt version id like you to tell me your opinion  , maybe i am comminting a huge msitake and the first version was ok the way it was 4. sorry if you faved the first and then you see this and think "arf what a rip why did i faved a work in process, and now i see a second version" i never see the first one as a wip. 5 this is the first time i re-work in a piece, and is great to be honest Thansk to all poeple who faved the first one |
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It is a lovely piece on it's own but since you are asking for more feedback I would be happy to give you my thoughts.
I am more fond of the expression from Golden Dream (v1) not to say that v2 isn't awesome it is just a really different expression i think
the GDv1 expression is much softer(the eyes) with a slight "mona lisa" smile.. while the GDv2 expression is kinda more sultry(the eyes) and more defined lips, but it seems like less of a smile.
I notice you also reworked the hair... it is much more "seamless" on v2, but the shape of the hair on v1 is fantastic....
I like both of them, and sometimes it really is awesome to rework a piece *nods*
what is really most important is that you are happy with the piece and that it is how you wanted it to be
I hope this info helps in some way, but everyone likes different things and has different opinions you know ^,^ my ideas may not be in the majority of your viewers, who knows
anyway, be well ^_^
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